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HGTV and Me Open in new Window. [E]
A humorous rhyming poem about my learning design through watching HGTV after my retirement
by Harry Author Icon
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Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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"The Humorous Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. [18+].


*Star* I had a laugh reading your poem! It starts off so normal with the first verse -- just talking about a normal guy, and then it slowly takes off in another direction, which allows the comedy shine! *Cool*

*Star* I thought the rhyming was done to perfection and pushed the humor at the right moments. I also liked how you weaved all the different words to describe all the design elements -- not always easy to do, but it came across really well to paint a good visual.

*Star* The biggest laugh I got was at the end -- awesome punchline! I didn't see that coming at all. I had a fun time reading it, and I found it entertaining. Thanks for supporting the contest! *Bigsmile*

~Lornda

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