Hi! I live with a car aficionado, so I was drawn to this story. First of all, I commend your spelling and grammar; too many people either ignore spelling or commit typos and don't bother to proof read. I, too, like the short story venue with prompts. It definitely exercises the brain. Ah, if only we could go for one last ride. I like the premise of this tale. Your story is well-written.
You responded to this review 10/19/2015 @ 3:42pm EDT
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