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Dreaming to be with someone
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Hi Christella! This is a freely-flowing verse describing a love, a strong need. You use the word 'enlighten', but in this line, the verb tense is 'enlightened'. The correct word is 'you're or you are' NOT 'your'. I'm sorry, I don't understand,"the one that your cared".
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