Hi Gingerbug! Cute pseudonym! This a story with a twist. Nobody expects something cute and fuzzy to attack and hurt them. This is short. Maybe you could add more descriptors to this to create a longer and more developed story. I'd suggest that you not use 'her' twice in the second sentence. I know that one refers to your friend and one means the dog, but for clarification, one of the "hers' needs to be switched. The same idea applies to the name "Ginger"; is it the dog's name or that of your friend?