Hi Laura! What a great way to flex your writing muscles. The prompt based contests are such fun. You managed to fuse three disparate words into a cohesive story. I must confess, I don't understand the repetition of the last lines. Was it an editing error?
You responded to this review 10/19/2015 @ 5:24pm EDT
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