Hello! I can imagine a duck and a cat squaring off against each other. Remember, punctuation is important. There should be a period after "my nap house!". I said. Where you write of the spit balls and fart starting with "but", a comma is needed after the word "farted" and before the word "so". Either make it two separate sentences or use an "and" in the sentence about swords sticking in fur. Also, The "i'm" needs a to be "I'm". With some more description this could become a more complex tale.