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 Human society! Open in new Window. [E]
The rich always take from the poor to.get richer!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! This is a thought-provoking piece. Why indeed? It always seems to be a wide line between the rich and the poor. This is well-written. I would recommend an apostrophe in the third line; "poor man's field". Have you thought to enter some of the WDC poetry contests?
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