Hello! This is a well-written piece. You used the prompt words in a creative way. When you describe the sign with Alva I think the connective word "to" is missing. "The gods would send a sign to mark the chosen one". There are annoying marks left from your editing that need to be removed, but that is a learning curve with WDC formatting. Also the word "the" is missing when describing the ground shaking for Salazar.