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Hello oldmonty Welcome to WDC and gee you are getting around fast, awesome! *Smile*

I think your poem is a perfect read for a child and also a perfect reader for a child
a very good accomplishment ^5

The first and last verses work great together.

Nice visuals..

Rhyming is Free Form in it and that's OK

Some nice inner treats as well *Wink*

Thanks for this pleasure,
Luna

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