Very good point Candied Apples but first a big welcome to WDC !

Your string of Japanese is a very cool one.

Your title is spot on from my perception.
My perception of your Japanese is that you do not like writing Haiku
because of the difficulty and yes they are very complicated in their simplicity.
SO
You have written a string of related Senryu
It's all good depending on the perception of the reader.

It's gets a ^5 from me weather or not ya planned it that way

Thanks,
Luna