Hello Rose Scott and welcome to WDC!

I read your poem about books and you should know that you say books are made for showing
Yet you do very little showing in your poem.
This is not terrible at all it just shows you are in the right place here on WDC

It is unwise to use words like;
feel
smell
see

It also needs more visual as in;
dragons
armies
kings
knights
thieves
colorful images along with those umm labels? would add to the imagery of this poem nicely.

If you are interested in truly practicing the craft then go here as this link will take you to a group here on WDC.

http://p15.writing.com/main/handler/item_id/1937699-The-Poets-Place

Best of luck now,

Luna