Greetings, Don Two ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

Prompt: I was watching the bob of his Adam's apple when I realized that . . .

Clever story! There must be something in the air because this is the third out of four entries that includes something to do with sex. Hmm... Anyway, good work! A humorous read!

I'm a little curious (and perhaps naive) about the ending, which relates to the title. I know you included it to show how knowledgeable Eve was, but it felt a little detached from the rest of the story. But that's just my opinion. This was a fun read!

Very enjoyable!

I loved the humor:

Here comes my husband, carrying what look like animal skins. What’s that Adam? We have to wear these now? Oh all right, it is a bit chilly. Besides, it might add to the mystery of it all! (Wink, wink.)

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .