Greetings, Asferthecat ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

Prompt: I was watching the bob of his Adam's apple when I realized that . . .

OMG... this reminds me of something we'd see on "The Twilight Zone" years ago! I loved that show when I was a little girl but it was scary! Your story of the mirrored images would've been perfect for that series.

I was curious about one thing... So when Graham reads the paper, will he notice that the words are mirrored, too? I would love to read more details. Are you considering making this into something longer at some point? I'm also curious about Graham, if he's been there all along (the mirror image) and are the real people still on the other side, or are they stuck now? (Can you tell I like this?)

I bet you would be good at one of my contests, though it's closed for judging at the moment. Check out "Picture a Story CLOSED/UnderConstruction" . I'll be adding a new image soon, but I'm pretty sure you would like it. Plus it's good practice!

I liked this visual:
He glared at me. “What are you staring at?”
“Nothing.” I hurriedly lowered my eyes to my toast, my mind in a whirl.

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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