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*Witchhat* Greetings, patteyb Author Icon! Thank you for entering "The Writer's CrampOpen in new Window.!

Prompt: Very few stories are written in the point of view of Second-person because it's hard to pull off. Your challenging prompt today is to write a fictional scary story or poem in *Second-person POV.
         *Second-person is "you" as the main character.


*Reading* Good job following the prompt. Your Second-person POV worked well in this piece. *Wink*

*Ghost* A fun piece for the Halloween season!

*Baretree3* I loved the following lines:

You sprint out of the woods and to your back door.
Thank God you're alive and not bones and gore.


*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and... *Witch*
*Witchhat*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Witchhat*


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