Greetings, beggermoot! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

Prompt: Very few stories are written in the point of view of Second-person because it's hard to pull off. Your challenging prompt today is to write a fictional scary story or poem in *Second-person POV.
         *Second-person is "you" as the main character.

Your story is interesting and has potential, for sure. The main thing I found mind-boggling, was the switch back and forth between tenses. The other thing, was the entire story was written without any line breaks, so it made it a bit tedious to read. But I did find this piece curious and I do hope you will use it in some future story.

Very interesting!

I loved the line:

The synapses in your brain are misfiring like a damaged engine.

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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