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*Witchhat* Greetings, amyjo-Keeping it real and fun! Author Icon! Thank you for entering "The Writer's CrampOpen in new Window.!

Prompt: Very few stories are written in the point of view of Second-person because it's hard to pull off. Your challenging prompt today is to write a fictional scary story or poem in *Second-person POV.
         *Second-person is "you" as the main character.


*Reading* *Laugh* This made me laugh, especially at the end. *Laugh* I could easily picture you trying to come up with something to write in Second-person POV, waiting for that gol-darn muse to wake up and help! This was a fun read. *Wink*

*Ghost* Great job on accomplishing this tough POV! "Invalid EntryOpen in new Window. is a nice addition to your "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window.

*Baretree3* I loved the lines:

You write and write your poetry;
It's all you want to do.
Your Muse has done run off now,
And your deadline's looming due.


*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and... *Witch*
*Witchhat*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Witchhat*


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