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*Witchhat* Greetings, Jacky Author Icon! Thank you for entering "The Writer's CrampOpen in new Window.!

Prompt: Very few stories are written in the point of view of Second-person because it's hard to pull off. Your challenging prompt today is to write a fictional scary story or poem in *Second-person POV.
         *Second-person is "you" as the main character.


*Reading* You've accomplished this challenge with a scary poem written in Second-person. And you've also stayed in one tense, which is hard to do at times. Very nice! *Smile*

*Ghost* Your last line amused me, lol. *Laugh*

*Baretree3* Great example of Second-person POV:

You’re tucked in your bed; it’s so late.
You were falling asleep, but now, wait…


*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and... *Witch*
*Witchhat*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Witchhat*


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