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*Witchhat* Greetings, Lostwordsmith Author Icon! Thank you for entering "The Writer's CrampOpen in new Window.!

Prompt: Very few stories are written in the point of view of Second-person because it's hard to pull off. Your challenging prompt today is to write a fictional scary story or poem in *Second-person POV.
         *Second-person is "you" as the main character.


*Reading* Very clever. *Wink* And your Second-person POV is well-accomplished! You might consider sending this into a children's publisher for a Halloween-type book, or even a children's magazine. You'll want to work just a little on the meter/flow, but I think that could easily be remedied!

*Ghost* Nice work... *Wolf*

*Baretree3* A great visual here:

You dart out of the bed
and dash across the hall,
no footsteps do you hear,
but you see the shadow on the wall.


*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and... *Witch*
*Witchhat*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Witchhat*


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