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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC *Flipflops7*
This is a Simply positive Review.

*Choco* Wow, that was a sneaky thing to do to poor Cathy. However, I cannot feel too bad about the outcome, since Cathy knew right from the start, that the costume was already a "perfect fit," thus any weight gain would have kept her from being able to fit into it at dress rehearsal.

*FlagSt* The story is a flash fiction, quick and quirky with a predictable ending, as the reader could assume that the chocolates and flowers were being sent by her closest competition for the part in the play.

*AntR* However, it told a story that the reader could picture in her mind, and did it with a couple prompt words, (I assume since they were in bold font,) woven into the story with ease and believability.

Well done! *Snow3*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch

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