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Hello there, oldmonty!
Welcome back to WDC *Web4*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Frown* Your poem touched my heart in such a profound way. I could see the path of life, a road seeming to be long, and yet, already I look behind me and see more of my life's road, has already been traveled, than will be traveled from this point forward. *Wave3*

*Leaf* Yes, time does fly-by at practically a blink of the eye.

*Grass* Your poem was a smooth read, lovely melodious rhythm, perfect rhyme, and no forced spots that I could catch.

*Tackr* I liked the pattern, the seven syllables per line restraint. To keep within those parameters verse after verse without a word seeming out of place, is no easy task.

Kudos! *WitchHat*

*Angel* I loved this poem for its beauty and its sadness. It contains the rich quality of life being lived and facing a new "life" in His eternal kingdom of joy unspeakable. *Bird*

Good job! *PawPrints*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WW



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