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Hello there, Lostwordsmith
Welcome back to WDC!
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Motorcycle*

*Mars* I really enjoyed the spirit of this Halloween poem, the structure, which was clever and unusual, and the rhythmic flow, which was melodious and easy on the eyes and to the ear when spoken out loud. Rhyme was well placed and not forced for the "sound" of it. Thus, it made perfect sense at the end of the rhyme-line.

*BoxCheckR* I so love this time of year, when all the creative juices flow down the path of the spooky and the thrills and chills of Halloween. This poem is just one example of the fun and the vivid imagery that accompanies it.


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In one[,] light rules,

*Lightning2* Well done! I think it was harshly rated for whatever reason, perhaps the form did not sit well with the reader. However, the poem itself held its own, just fine, thus I'm boosting the rating a bit to help even-out the previous rating, which may have changed since this was stored in my Review Tool. *Wink*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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