I loved it. I absolutely loved it. You are so clever to get such an inspiring and truthful poem out of NANOWRIMO for the topic.

I couldn't figure out why the family were all dressed up, I was thinking suits or tux's until I got to the line about the candy. Then I got it. lol

I also love the optimism in your 'third down'. Good for you. I was also doing that until I got sidetracked writing ya novels for my grandkids.

Thanks for sharing with us.
love, LinnAnn