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My Grandma . . . . Jesus is so proud of her.
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Hello Dan Sturn Author Icon

This little poem is a beautiful, moving memorial to your Grandma and the faith she held onto until her death. The loss of a loved one is not an easy topic to write about but you handle it with warmth and sensitivity here. The poem flows well and I didn't spot any errors. You say in the description that Jesus is proud of your Grandma. I think, in turn, she'd be so proud of you for writing this. Very powerful title too.


Best wishes,
Mark


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