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Review of FEARFUL  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:Thought-provoking to say the least. I was riveted by the words you've written.

*PenB* My favorite part: The last line; where the fear is faced at last.

*PenR* Some suggestions are: Only one that I can think of: Fourth line, the word divulge - I'm thinking it should be divulgement. But it is my opinion only.

*PenG* Overall: You've shown a lot of thought in your writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. *Smile*

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

sincerely,
amy

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