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 Orange Open in new Window. [E]
Daily Flash Fiction Challenge (3/6/08)
by Jeff is Gru in #2343485 Author Icon
Review of Orange  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I like the way you drew me in with the color choice. At first I wasn't sure where it was going...perhaps an eccentric person with a fetish for orange? Then as I read the end, it dawned on me that it was a prison orange you were talking about. It must have been a long time if the main character cannot remember when he last wore other colors of clothing.
I spotted no typos or grammar issues with your writing. Thank you for sharing this story. Amazing how a few words can say so much.

sincerely,
amy

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