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Given: Nov 12, 2015 at 8:48pm
Length: 518 Characters |
510 w/o WritingML
I like the way you drew me in with the color choice. At first I wasn't sure where it was going...perhaps an eccentric person with a fetish for orange? Then as I read the end, it dawned on me that it was a prison orange you were talking about. It must have been a long time if the main character cannot remember when he last wore other colors of clothing.
I spotted no typos or grammar issues with your writing. Thank you for sharing this story. Amazing how a few words can say so much.
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