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 Bad Habit Open in new Window. [E]
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Review of Bad Habit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE TITLE-
I stumble on your poem in the Newbies Section, while flapping my little wings. What makes me enticed is the given title.
Every one can relay on it. We all have Bad habits. Bad habits creates a negative imagery, but we tend to do it, because its our habits, sometimes this one can be one that will identify us.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader. *Thumbsup*

*Star* A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
I can say that this is beautiful poetry. Words scribbled is like lyrics in Music.
This is romantic also, looking our love one as bad habit, because we always crave them.
They are really a hard habit to break.


*Cut* COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't see words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,and I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

Regards,

Samberine Sig.
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