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Review #4180079
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 Eternal Peace Open in new Window. [E]
In His love
by HRK Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi HRK Author IconMail Icon*Smile*

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I'm Samberine Everose Author IconMail Iconyour little fairy friend here in WDC. *FairyL*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *Giftr* to you for being here..*ButterflyR*

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com. *Smile*I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Reading* THE TITLE-
I'm flapping my little wings again into your homefolio, to search for something to review. And this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because the title seems to be interesting. This is not new, I find this in the genre of dark or death or in times of Grief.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader. *Thumbsup*

*Star* A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created.

THE BODY-
This is just in few words, but the scribbled words is compact and created an impact.
The created imagery on the first two lines can draw the reader closer, because of the emotion.
Words like tears, shed, moments, path, peace, heart and relieved were linked each other.
In few lines but the piece is uplifting and inspiring.
Really links and define the given title.

*Cut* COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't see words that can distract the flow of the poem.
just only the proper used of Punctuation marks.
Punctuation marks can help to stimulate the emotion.

Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece, I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

Regards,

Samberine Sig.
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