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BLACKBIRD
by M.Prelooker

E-Two-#blowme

Chapter 8 - wanna get some?

I'm shocked. This is just a hair over one page.

>>> inspecting every bottle and discarding them all.
We would be interested in what she's shopping for. When you say 'bottle' it suggests the liquor department. A little wine perhaps?

>>> Wanna come over?”
What a guy. A masculine blond bimbo.

>>> and just rush to pick up some daring lingerie, to swing by his place in the mood for a little action.
I'm horrified to think that this ever happened in the past. Gillian, how could you?

>>> “Your loss, then, because I'fve got something special for you.”
Geez, this guy should go back to high school...or I guess he never left.

>>> “Alright.” And sit tight to wait for my call, you frigging idiot.
I think there is a plan here...A new kind of romance is going to grow?

>>> She disconnected and her eyes fell on a classic, elegant box.
My first thought was that it was something from Brock after his autograph experience with Henderson.


>>> Wouldn't it be too much? Well, she had already given away she was a stupid fangirl, right?
On second though, this sounds like she has something for Brock...or for her boss to annoy him more. Those are my two possibilities. I think it leans towards Brock because of the 'fangirl' thought.

Don't blink, because this chapter is finished.

Best, Gale, who is moving on to 9.



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