Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

My first impression: The title caught my eye. Having "been there, done that", I wanted to see what would cause a meltdown of another domestic diva. I'm sure it would be something of catastrophic proportions! Well, it wasn't, thank goodness. Just a bad day kind of thing. The idea of "Honey-boo" taking something "under advisement" cracked me up...what was he doing? Smoking crack, or something? That just "ain't done"!

Other thoughts: You had a wonderful blend of reminiscing, snarkiness, and laughter mixed into your work. It had me smiling, laughing and shaking my head. Yes, I've definitely "been there, done that". I loved reading your work.

My favorite parts: The back and forth dialog between you and your daughter was priceless. For what it is worth, I hope you do/did get her the white apron. It will sure be good for laughs and a wonderful memory to boot.

Some suggestions: Suggestions, hmmm. I think this would be a wonderful start to a book. Full of entries along the line of Erma Bombeck's books. For more info, I've given you a link to check out, if interested:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erma_Bombeck

Overall: A wonderful piece to relax and enjoy. It was enjoyable from beginning to end! A wonderful story.


sincerely,

amyjo

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