Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

My first impression: What a lovely fairy-tale like story. It was wonderful, and even had flowers, birds chirping, and a moo cow in the background. Completely adorable!

Other thoughts: The tone is set as a fairy-tale. I could picture it in my mind, almost along the lines of Sleeping Beauty or Snow White...LOL. I understand a little bit about your hesitation, but as you can see...The King and Queen were right about you !

My favorite parts: I like how you describe StoryMaster and StoryMistress as the benevolent King and Queen of the Land of Writing.com. It is appealing, and you captured me from the start of your story.

Some suggestions: I have no suggestions to add to your tale. I found no typos or grammar issues. This was well thought out and executed.

Overall: I'm glad you've embraced your promotion, and am very happy to know you and see your hard work. I enjoy your challenges and being a part of the Power Reviewers, as well as working on other things within our Kingdom. Thank you for sharing this wonderful little work. Happy WdC Anniversary too!


sincerely,

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