Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work.

My first impression: This is a sweet tribute to anniversaries several, and several more. Silver is traditional for 25, and Gold is traditional for 50.

Other thoughts: I liked how you explained the form used, and the description for that particular form. Your poem flowed smoothly, and had a nice rhythm to it.

My favorite parts: The last line sounded like a Southern gentleman whispering to his long-time love: "This time Ah brought you flow'rs." Wonderfully romantic ending to your poetry.

Some suggestions: I would love to know what inspired you to write this poem. Was it just the prompts that you listed at the end of the poem, or was there a memory involved, or a hope? Inquiring minds are nosy (or just want to know )

Overall: This poem was well thought out and executed. You followed the format to a "T", and I saw no typos or grammar issues in your writing. I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. Happy WdC Anniversary!


sincerely,

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