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for the "Smiling Skies" contest.

My first impression: Wow! I am still shaking some after having read your story. It was so sensual, so delicate...then Wham! The violence and the destruction of the words shocked me into a stunned disbelief.

What I thought about your personification: Your book came alive as I read your words. These words could have come from a human lover, without losing the feeling evoked in the story. You nailed this personification all the way! I did have to chuckle about the "know it all" book your character had to stand by on the shelf...as I said, a human character couldn't have pulled this story off any better!

Some suggestions I have: Suggestion to make this better? Hah! This story was well thought out and executed. I saw no typos or grammar issues with your writing. I do wonder what inspired this story. It touched me on such an emotional level. In my opinion, I feel like you have an excellent shot at winning this round of the contest.

Overall: I am still in disbelief with the way the story ended. I can guess what happened, but am not totally sure. Perhaps a spurned lover? Mental illness? Broken marriage? I would guess one of these things, but it was sad how it was taken out on the journal of "love letters" when the emotional attachment was so great. Even with the journal's "dying breath" the love for the woman was still strong, and the love was there as it turned to ash - just like its heart. Bravo on such a tale. Sweet sensuality, forgotten, then destroyed...You cannot get any more emotional than that, even if the cause isn't completely known. Powerful stuff!


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