Hello!Sanita

I just read your poem "Invalid Item" 

It’s beautiful poem. A mother loves her child unconditionally and nothing else can stand beside mothers love. Through the poem the poet expressed her feeling for her child who is far away from her. She felt him as she looking at his photograph. She express her feeling by telling in with this lines “Deep red for the love,

That you hold in your heart,”
She had chosen the different colors to describe her love for him. I like the rhyming of this poem. Every stanza of this poem has the rhyme scheme of A, B, A, B. And this makes the rhythm of this poem faster and brighter. I enjoyed reading this poem.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.


Mina  


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