I selected to read and review this poem when I came across in the nature genre list.
I love this poem because of the main thought of the poem about our mother nature. It’s written so beautifully that makes me read your poem to the end. It describes lot of problems created by us (the human being). We the human being rules the sea, air and land. But today she is getting polluted by us.
Even though we know that there is no other planet to live.
Now comes time to have a new start and think and do to save our dear planet. You are telling all these beautifully by the lines of your poem “It’s time to make my final stand, to make you go away,
to clear the smell and clean the land, and seek a better day.”
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.
Happy Writing!
Mina
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