This is a good start here. I feel that part of a prologue is to get your reader hooked into reading more. I feel that there are some pieces missing here with the introduction of the main character and the purpose of the story. I feel the diary entry could have been longer. Instead of saying he was looking at all the things in the attic, show this with the character going through the different items. I feel that with some expansion in giving more details this can be a better story. Thanks for sharing.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .