Review number # 3 of week May 5-11th

Hi Timtu

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Some Final Words on E.T. Brains Part 1

First Impression: I agree with the thought that E.T. being capable of conscious cruelty as Hawking notes. I am not inclined to assign behavior expectations to unknown enmities.

What I liked: How the author broke down each point with clear discussion points so the reader could pause and reflect on the subject.

What needs your attention: Nothing, your grammar and punctuation appear right on to this reader. Nothing, distracted this reader in this informative piece at all.

Favorite Parts: I thought the discussion about Independence day was very engaging to read. I just don't buy into the theory that everything is clear cut good versus evil scenario. There is too much gray area in everything in life that could easily go one direction or the other. It was a great introduction into the discussion about Hitler and the Jews in my opinion. That period of history to me is fascinating to read about because it is so hard for me to believe that human beings would treat their fellow human beings so deplorably.

Overall Impression: Excellent discussion with great explanations throughout your piece. I am looking forward to reading the second part next.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .