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![]() | I HAVE SAILED THE SEAS OF SORROW ![]() A young woman laments the loss of her father - (A sample from my Poetry folder) ![]() |
My Greeting: Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two! My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful. My Thoughts: I was both drawn into and curious by your title and your description of your poem and as I came on in my very first thought was, WOW!!! I found this to be very clever, unique, heartfelt, emotional, kind, clever, a one of a kind of poem for sure, and very creative indeed. This is like a little story that I can completely feel and see as you really do have a way with words as you weave your web or words captivation your readers in such a way that they can actually feel and see exactly what it is that you are saying! My Favorite Parts: I have to say that I really loved your poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single line, after all, it all fits so perfectly together! My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job! My Suggestions: Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what. My Rating: I am rating your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating. This review is coming to you from; "Applaud a Member of The Angel Army" ![]() sunnystarr ![]() ![]()
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