Hello Scribe of Tyrell!

I'm a digger of poetry and came across this piece of yours through the random review generator. I love that nifty button for finding ports I'd otherwise not come across. Now, let's get started popping and dropping with your review.

Below is my review of your item beginning with Corrections:

Corrections/Suggestions
Nothing to suggest or correct.

My Favorite Line(s)
two weeks of living hell;
insisting it was what she wanted.
We treat condemned criminals
with more dignity.-

I really do like these lines with the strength of them and how you finish this.

Overall Comments
Overall, I found this a strong poem and I love your verbiage you use for it. The way it flowed and the rhythm was on point as well. The only part I had a bit of a skip was "upon receiving..." I would maybe recommend taking out 'upon' but this is just a small tinker and up to you. I enjoyed coming across this piece and being sent to check out your port. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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