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Given: Jun 25, 2016 at 9:21am
Length: 587 Characters |
580 w/o WritingML
Hello! I found your poem while searching the 'legal' genre. Reading the poem I was interested in the rhyme scheme and looked up Dante's variation after I finished, I now understand . I like the way the poem is pro-law as well. Sure there are corrupt police and judges, jail guards and wardens, and this piece seems to be a very blind way of saying 'the law is perfect. At least here in America, it is not. I believe it is indeed for 'rent' and will go to the highest bidder. Oh for a land where that is not so.
Overall I enjoyed the word choice and rhyme of the poem. Write on!
You responded to this review 06/25/2016 @ 10:08am EDT
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