Hello there again Schujno!

I know you challenged me the last Haiku to try this out myself and I'm like... no, too little words, too much to say kind of thing. But, you seem to really take on this challenge well. I like how even with the restriction it has you still describe and have so much in three stanzas.

Below is my review of your item beginning with Corrections:

Suggestion(s)
twisting twigs surround-

I don't know if this would throw off your syllables too much, but, I would recommend going through here and taking the -ing words and changing them to -ed. Since that -ing is said to be more 'passive' and the other is more 'active' if that makes sense.

Things Which I Enjoyed
I really enjoyed the image of the hatchlings breaking through and having a safe place in the last line.

Overall Comments
Overall, I found this to be another well done short poem of yours. The only thing I have to suggest or recommend was the -ing words and playing with them. Besides that your imagery says a lot with very little and you tackled this extremely well especially for a challenge/contest. Like I've told you I'm not a Haiku expert but I'd say you did this very well. And, I figured since it is a Haiku and a shorter piece you might not be getting the same reviews as a longer one so I wanted to read/review it for you. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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