Hello W.D.!

I came across this piece about you poking around your port. As you know, this is the handy dandy SB- Sarah Brooks to come over and check this out. There's so many things I could relate to about this biography describing your life.

Below is my review of your item beginning with Corrections:

Corrections/Suggestions
I don't have anything correct or suggest for you.

Things Which I Enjoyed
Dolly, was her name; a Welsh Pony, brown as fresh baked bread with a black mane and tail. Gosh, I loved that horse. The experience and memories are ones that I will never forget, and there is no amount of money that could ever replace that.-

I loved this part, describing your horse and how she was 'as brown as fresh baked bread.' Even though I'm younger, as you know, I enjoyed the simplicity of these times. I had to work for everything I had, riding lessons were spent working 9 hours or more at a stable doing everything for a one hour lesson. I knew people who had a diary farm and it was hard work, but extremely rewarding.

Overall Comments
Overall, I loved reading more about your life and how you lived it. I spent a lot of days working hard and it seems like you did the same and I'm so glad that you had that one English teacher who turned you onto writing. I feel like teachers are instrumental in structuring a child's life into a vibrant adult. They are our cheerleaders when we don't believe in ourselves. I really dig that you pursued your love of playing an instrument, a guitar, and I can see you being a great father from your outlook on the world. Plus, the picture of you with your kids together is just awesome and shows how much they think of you. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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