Title of Work: : The Jerk Who Walks Through Walls
Author of Work: : Lani
Date: : July 2, 2016

Plot:
A writer is getting ready to finish up a story she is writing when she finds a man standing at her door, saying he is the jerk of a character in the story she is just finishing.

Scene/Setting:
The author is sitting in her office, trying to finish a story. She hears someone and thinks it is her husband up out of bed. When she looks up a strange man in standing in her office doorway. She asks who he is and he says he is the jerk in the current tale she is writing. He wants her to change it so he can be a good guy for at least once. He wants to get the girl and live happily ever after. They have a discussion on the possibilities open to her for changing the story.

Characters:
Author
Peter - character in story

Suggestions:
I liked this story, although I think if I was sitting in my office writing and the man you describe as Peter was standing in the doorway, I probably would have screamed. I like the way you have introduced other stories you have written, to the reader of this one. You have also demonstrated how authors can make more than one version of a story work. I was wondering how you were going to end the story. The ending you picked was simple and perfect.

I am also a fan of Robert Heinlein and it was nice to give him at least partial credit for giving you a spark of an idea for creating this one.



Character Count: 1,239 (tags = 222 Characters)
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