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A review for House of Grey Joy in the Game of Thrones
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Review of Ray Rice

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. I create this review for the Game of thrones contest and for the House of Grey Joy.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Everyone knows the situation. Ray Rice a running back for the Baltimore Ravens was video taped assaulting his own wife in an elevator. the result is that the Ravens suspended him for two games. More suspensions came later and the question of domestic violence with football players filled the newspapers. There is a controversy that really needed not to just involve athletes but all people.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Ray Rice and his wife Janay Palmer were involved in this domestic violence situation. The question brought forward by this article is that his employer and the NFL should apply additional fines ans suspensions. I think the rules should apply for everyone not just well known people.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A good venue to begin the conversation.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep posting

dblameck





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