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Someone Open in new Window. [ASR]
A different look into someone taking their life.
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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A review for the House of Grey Joy in the Game of Thrones

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Review of Someone

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is done for the Game of Thrones and the House of GreyJoy.


OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This is a wonderful story of a girl who feels that she has nothing to live for and decides to kill herself using her mother's sleeping pills.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Finally she does what she has planned. Once taking the pills she has a dream. The dream shows God and Jesus showing their love. However in the end Jesus has to turn her over to Satan. For now it was too late. She had made her decision and she dies.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
You said she was await. I think you meant awake.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

This is a good story and it is very emotional. We must love our kids while we have them. Please write more stories like this one.

dblameck





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