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Changing Views  [13+]
An aging man finds himself alone and angry in his changed neighborhood.
by Fairport
Review of Changing Views  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Review of Changing Views

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is done for the Game of Thrones contest for the House of GreyJoy.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story about a man who has lived in his neighbourhood for a long time and is not happy about the changes. He has complaints and does not feel that anyone is on his side.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Bob the main character has been in the neighbourhood for many years and feels that it has changed drastically over the last twenty years. It seems the population is getting younger and that most people are speaking spanish. Some of the old buildings are gone and two years ago a condo complex was built that bob feels is ugly. To protest he is marching with only a helmet and boot. The police come to intervene again.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing.

dblameck





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