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 Independence Day  [E]
What is the cost of being on our own ?
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Review of Independence Day  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Review of Independence Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. The review is being done the the Game of thrones contest for the House of GreyJoy

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

It is the eve of independence day. Two hundred and forty years ago the people of the Thirteen American Colonies embarked on a difficult program that resulted in a nation building experiement. The short portion of prose looks at this with wonder that the world thing has not unraveled even as the cultures have progressed and changed in that period.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I enjoyed the two central questions most of all.

Considering man’s destructive nature, how is it that we still stand?

and

With all our bombs and all our differences. how do we still exist?

Of course we know it is sheer yankee determination.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Expand your ideas.



dblameck





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