Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I felt instantly riveted to your experience and am glad that you survived and were able to tell this miraculous story.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I think it's important to share our experiences that lead us into a walk of faith. People are different in their faith journeys: Some find faith right away and don't ever stray, others have a more intermittent walk, going back and forth, and still others never walk at all. This story is for people, I think on their intermittent walk. It affirms the power of miracles and they happen daily.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It's a story on the potency of miracles and God's work in our lives. Things happen all the time that show life is irregular and you choose to discount it as accident or believe it happens by design. This piece has a definite design perspective.


Glows:

It was easy to follow and I love that you followed up with a summation of events that happened after the accident.



Grows:

I would consider changing but to and in the second sentence.



Miscellaneous Comments:

A question you don't have to answer but would be interesting is why didn't your husband want you to consider being saved from the accident a miracle? Was it the accident or is it just him?


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