Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

You describe writer's block beautifully. I've been there, done that. To me, it always seems like a dream. My writing is at its best when I'm going through some angst. I'm not sure why but anxiety is my trigger. I wonder if anxiety is a common solution.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I think a writer who has ever experienced writer's block would love it. I know it's right up my alley. Thank you for bringing it to the written word.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I think it explains it well. It seemed so easy a moment ago. It describes the nature of it. Sometimes, it's like a fire and burns hot and others you can barely get an ember. It' the nature of the beast.


Glows:

My favorite verse is the more I read, the less I know. It speaks to my self doubt about all my intellectual insecurities so I related really well to that line.



Grows: {

Some of your verses rhyme and some don't. I can only write in free verse unless I learn more types of formal poetry but maybe making it more consistent with the rhyming might make it flow a little easier.



Miscellaneous Comments:

Thank you for sharing a relatable piece for many of us!


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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