Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

Sadly, I think we are attached to labels. They allow us to put each other into categories and make it easier to define us. This way we don't have to think to hard or get too creative. We can spend our time on things that really matter like: reality t.v. and Youtube.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Everyone. I love that you address one of society's ills in such an artful and vulnerable way. I would recommend this piece to anyone struggling with a label or maybe feeling the need to question why we label.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

To me the purpose is make us question the relevance of labels. In this piece, the author so urgently requests one just so she can be remembered. What kind of statement does that make to those of us who readily assign labels? If you don't have a label, them I can't prioritize you. It's a sad truth, but in many cases, that's many realities.


Glows:

Another vulnerable piece that isn't afraid to show it's humanity. It's humbling and inspiring to see this amount of sensitivity in a piece of work.



Grows:

I'm not sure if I like the term flies beyond, but that's just me. Thank you for sharing your work.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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