Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

It's a great piece about nature's whimsical fury. I wonder if you live in California? The hillside line made me think. I am always amazed at nature's awe striking ability to destroy what we work so hard to build. It makes me contemplate on the smallness of man.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Absolutely, the imagery in here is amazing. Each line paints a picture like a National Geographic magazine shot.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I thought about the last line. It made me think that the earth is shows its pain and suffering when it goes through these cycles. But, I almost think of it as new beginnings. The environmentalist in me (which is not a strong indicator currently of who I am but a picture of who I once was and maybe will be again) thinks if Earth was a person, we'd be parasites to it. I don't think it would like us too much.


Glows:

It's very vivid and creates a beautifully devastating picture. It makes me sad and mourn for people affected by these tragedies.



Grows:

I'd think about changing the last line but that might be my purpose, not your intended one.



Miscellaneous Comments:

It was beautiful and made me think of my former self. Thank you for sharing it.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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